Desire

Desire

A Poem by Diana

I hate you 
and your mazes
and winding paths
leading to black holes
unending...

© 2013 Diana


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So much left unsaid between the lines of this little gem, Diana. Sounds like someone you love to hate. I liked it a lot. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Lydi. I was worried it might be too "angsty."
Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

nah, not at all. don't be so hard on yourself.
Simple yet amazingly complex. Full marks from me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Pryde. That means a lot coming from you.
I hope it is not my desires that you hate......
but l know the emotion you write about. Trace

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

No, to the first (in reference to your stories).

And, yes, to the second.
Trace

10 Years Ago

Gotcha. What are you sipping there????
You have given desire(s) marvelous definitions and designations. Do you hate all desires or just some???

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

OK. Just wondering...You are welcome...:)..................
Diana

10 Years Ago

Thanks again.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure. Any time...:)..................

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