Desire
A Poem by
Diana
I hate you
and your mazes
and winding paths
leading to black holes
unending...
© 2013 Diana
Reviews
So much left unsaid between the lines of this little gem, Diana. Sounds like someone you love to hate. I liked it a lot. Lydi**
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, Lydi. I was worried it might be too "angsty."
10 Years Ago
nah, not at all. don't be so hard on yourself.
Simple yet amazingly complex. Full marks from me.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Simple yet amazingly complex. Full marks from me.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, Pryde. That means a lot coming from you.
I hope it is not my desires that you hate......
but l know the emotion you write about. Trace
Posted 10 Years Ago
I hope it is not my desires that you hate......
but l know the emotion you write about. Trace
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
No, to the first (in reference to your stories).
And, yes, to the second.
10 Years Ago
Gotcha. What are you sipping there????
You have given desire(s) marvelous definitions and designations. Do you hate all desires or just some???
Posted 10 Years Ago
You have given desire(s) marvelous definitions and designations. Do you hate all desires or just some???
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I like the (s). I don't think anyone can hate all desire(s). See what I did there? It is a feelin.. read more I like the (s). I don't think anyone can hate all desire(s). See what I did there? It is a feeling and most feelings are not permanent...
10 Years Ago
OK. Just wondering...You are welcome...:)..................
10 Years Ago
Thanks again.
10 Years Ago
My pleasure. Any time...:)..................
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