The Title Will Come at the End.

The Title Will Come at the End.

A Poem by Diana

The title will come at the end.
It rears its ugly head.
You fight it back
year after year.

You always have it
a mild drip, drip, drip
coursing through your veins.

There are times
when the dosage is too strong.
And you're left insensible,
vulnerable, and alone.

And circumstances don't help.
The longest spell you've had doesn't lift.
You can't go on like this.
Don't want to go on like this any more.
And physical problems escalate it
to a level never seen before.

You're out on your own in the world.
Support system no more.
Depression rears its ugly head.

© 2013 Diana


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Very courageous poem. Thank you for sharing these words, Diana.
My euphemism for depression is the "Valley of Ghosts". I have spent time on the steep, rocky slopes and spent time on the marshy valley floor. An easy place to get lost in. I pray you always find your way to higher ground, dear Diana.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Thank you, a more poetic take than mine. My first time writing about it...



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If i was to give a musical comparison in the classical state and meaning of your words, i would choose something old school. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9VANodra7O0

Posted 10 Years Ago


A freudan value and touch in pshychoanalysis in your powerful and true brevity of words about this subject. You have described it marvelously and the condition those ( us ) people that went or go through it at a certain time in their lives or ours. I like how you gave it a head and an ugly one too... Thank you for shedding the light on this serious medical and pshychological disease if I may call it that...:).....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Yes, medical and psychological, indeed. Thank you, Sami.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:).................
Very courageous poem. Thank you for sharing these words, Diana.
My euphemism for depression is the "Valley of Ghosts". I have spent time on the steep, rocky slopes and spent time on the marshy valley floor. An easy place to get lost in. I pray you always find your way to higher ground, dear Diana.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Thank you, a more poetic take than mine. My first time writing about it...
Such a powerfully psychological write, Diana. Those who have suffered with depression are never truly free of it. Yes, it is like a "drip drip" in the veins and it intensifies when it is least expected. Very well written. lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Lydi.

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