Say Something; You're Losing Me and I Was Already Lost.

A relationship without words is just a fantasy.

Say something; you're losing me

and I was already lost.

Flitting amongst the daisies.

Roaming aimlessly amongst

the fields of desire

running their course

through my mind.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

The power of conveyance and communication are very important in any relationship . Misunderstandings can lead us to lose trust and faith in things or people...A very good poem as I love to read all your poems...:)........................

[Diana]

Thank you, Sami. Always brightens my day when you stop by...

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time....:)................

[Desert Knave]

For some reason this made me think of that line "You had me at 'Hello'.". Sometimes the things said hold as much weight as the things done. Nicely written. ~Jim

[Diana]

I think I'd rather a "You had me at 'Hello.'" Thank you, Jim.

[Lydia Shutter]

Communication is the key...you know it, Diana. "you're losing me and I was already lost"....what a wonderful line this is! Lydi**

[Diana]

Thanks so much, Lydi. You got it.

[LightforChrist]

very beautiful and sadly true. Great job! :)

[Diana]

Thank you for reading.

[Jack...]

Sadly beautiful Diana. A relationship without words, deeply this touches me right now.

[Diana]

Thank you. There is no relationship without communication.

[Jack...]

Or much of anything else.

[Diana]

Truth......

[JessicaGadziala]

Very nice. The first two lines felt very powerful.

[Diana]

Thank you, Jessica.