It's Safer as Your Fantasy

It's safer as your Fantasy,

where I'm always Pretty

and of Good humour.

Never in Pain.

Always suffused with a warm Glow.

You don't see me Teary-eyed.

What am I?

Your pretty little Fantasy.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it may be safer, but it is better to have real life...real love...the fantasy bursts sooner or later...

and we need to love the good and the bad, the human person for whom we have these feelings.

can't kiss and hug and have a conversation with a fantasy...it's all in our own head...i want real.

[Diana]

Yes, people say that dream and fantasies don't hurt. I disagree. I am in line with your take on this. Thank you, Jacob.

[Diana]

It was meant to be ironic.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and it worked well...

[Lydia Shutter]

No one can always be in good spirits....no one who is human anyway. Falling in love with a fantasy is not healthy. To truly love, one must accept the other person totally. Well written poem, Diana. Lydi**

[ayosonolowo]

Nice poem, you've done well here....

[Diana]

Thank you.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Everything and everyone is better in a fantasy. That's why it's hard to let go of someone you never even had a chance with - because in your head it could have been perfect. And maybe that's why some people never take that extra step with someone they fantasize about - because they are afraid the person might not match up to the depiction in their head. You showed this very well, Diana! Thank you for sharing!

[Diana]

Thank you, Michael. You raise some good points.

[Baban.A.A]

it was very well-decriped, love is a reality we have to know, not to get way from it. what is here she absolutely knows who is she, a great descovery or amore-propre, when she knows where is she in is heart, or how he observe her, so it is a greatd escovery. after this stage it is time for immediate action, either assert herself, or tell him that I lovved you but love is bashful to look up because you did love and used love to use me. thank you it was very good.

[Diana]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, but action can't save all things.

[Baban.A.A]

you are right, but silence is another form of assent. when there are faults and affronts to one's humanity and love, if you don't take actions immediately they see themselves right not wrong, and they believe they had done the right thing; so they will use you and use you,and....till you lose the power to confront them, and then the first fault was their fault, but if they repeat the fault once more, it is not their fault, but yours. thanks

[Diana]

I hear you; i acted. Some of us were raised in a culture of silence...we find our words too late.read moreI hear you; i acted. Some of us were raised in a culture of silence...we find our words too late.

[Sami Khalil]

I'm basking in the warm glow of your sad mind but in your teary - eyed hopes...No fantasy when we are embraced in the truth and security of love...Awesome...:).........

[Diana]

You speak with such prescience and balance. Thank you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:)...........

[Frieda P]

Reality is much more stark, and not as flavorful, if we can't be ourselves with the ones we love, better to live in that fantasy world, well pen'd Diana.

[Diana]

Yes, thank you, Frieda.

[Jack...]

Diana this was great but a little sad. Smile my friend...laugh and have fun and please know...being someones fantasy is not a bad thing.

[Diana]

Good and bad are subjective in most cases... Thank you, Jack.