He Is of the Universe

He Is of the Universe

A Poem by Diana

He was never yours.
He belongs to the universe
from whence he came.

You become what you were
once again.

Dust to dust.
Ashes to ashes.
From whence you came.

is are was were
once again...

© 2013 Diana


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well I felt pity for the one who suffered this sorrowful repitition of life. to be honest, with me repitition is a slow dying, you have to alter the days in any way possible, because if you live just like the one in this poem, I surmise you are an animated dead. Though I can sense a story behind this poem, but you wrote something very true and wonderful, wonderful in content, though I like a different life for the speaker. well done. and best luck

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you. It isn't always a matter of choice.



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The Doors have a better wording then me https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3iM5lYqPxCo

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Diana

10 Years Ago

Okay, thanks.
I loved this:) The breath of life:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A universe of meaning in this piece. We are so small and yet part of something immense. No one person belongs to another; yet we are all one. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Diana

11 Years Ago

Yes, so much so. Thank you for reading.
I am not surprised by this poem; I have already know tragedies better then this. Write something which is unique , I already have worst memories then this one .... ...... He was never yours , he belongs to the universe ............. Gone too soon .............Very common thing in life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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sayed Mudasir Ali

11 Years Ago

Now this is what I really love and you did taught me a lesson which has lead me speechless here. I a.. read more
Diana

11 Years Ago

A more insightful comment this time...
sayed Mudasir Ali

11 Years Ago

Well deserved!
well I felt pity for the one who suffered this sorrowful repitition of life. to be honest, with me repitition is a slow dying, you have to alter the days in any way possible, because if you live just like the one in this poem, I surmise you are an animated dead. Though I can sense a story behind this poem, but you wrote something very true and wonderful, wonderful in content, though I like a different life for the speaker. well done. and best luck

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you. It isn't always a matter of choice.
"is are was were/ once again"

beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
nice and compact-economical of word

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you, sneer.
Perfect write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
A very sad write, Diana. No, we can not own any living thing really. We often lose sight of that. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Yes, thank you, Lydi.
One word : Awesome . In my library...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

I'm glad. Thank you, Sami.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).............

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