In an Ideal World

In an Ideal World

A Poem by Diana

In an ideal world
people could be what they are without worry.

In an ideal world 
we would have time for what's really important.

In an ideal world
the work would stop before overtaking us.

In an ideal world
people would recover from all injury.

In an ideal world 
there would be no pain that couldn't be eased.

In an ideal world
There would be no illness without cure.

In an ideal world
people would truly listen.

In an ideal world
everyone would care for everyone else.

In an ideal world
no one would ever die from need.

In an ideal world
the person writing this
would never hide 
that she is an idealist at heart.

© 2013 Diana


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I like the ideal world. Good to seek a place where we feel safe and sound. No perfect world. Maybe we can find a place to be content. Good to be a idealist. I believe if we lead by love and kindness. The world would be a better place. Thank you for reading and the comment.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Likewise, thank you for reading.



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Sorry but I felt this was great background

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

10 Years Ago

Interesting, thank you.
i like the repitition nice job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
"In an ideal world, people would truly listen" - This line meant a lot to me... because it is true.

I love the ending, also.

Great write. I love your work. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
I like the ideal world. Good to seek a place where we feel safe and sound. No perfect world. Maybe we can find a place to be content. Good to be a idealist. I believe if we lead by love and kindness. The world would be a better place. Thank you for reading and the comment.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Likewise, thank you for reading.
I love your writes. They are so magnetic and thoughtful. I'm hooked...:).......

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you. Your words are pleasantly surprising.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...................
Lovely thoughts from you as always...if only we lived in an ideal world and a peaceful world...nicely said Diana....Rose:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Rose.
If only...what is funny is so many people think this way, but it just doesn't come about. In an ideal world, each and every one of us would do our part, regardless of how small, to see these things you have mentioned become a reality. Nicely stated Diana.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

So many people think this way, but don't talk about it. Thanks, Jack.
Brings to mind John Lennon's "Imagine". Yes, in an ideal world. We can all hope for this in the future....why not? Lovely thoughts and images. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Lydi.
i am from the sixties , Diana---so i definitely hear you on this one..i too, always was and always will be an idealist...and hope that some, if not all, of this may someday come true.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob.

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