The One That Got Away

The One That Got Away

A Poem by Diana

The One That Got Away


Wine Glass in Hand,

I talk about 

the Feelings I reject.


Love, love, love.

The kids tell me

I have so much of it.

But I never speak of it.


There’s a Ring on her finger.

You tell me 

I’ll always be the One that got away.


Diamond ring

on the wrong finger.

Grandpa’s sweetheart.

No man just for you.

© 2013 Diana


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The one that got away. I think we all have one or two of those. Very nice poem I enjoyed reading this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The lines didn't make sense at first but after reading it the pieces formed themselves and gave me an interesting ambiguity. Not too literal, not too puzzling. This piece exists in between. Heartbreaking writing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nicely done Diana...very sad...enjoyed the theme...Rose:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Rose.
The sadness oozes from this write...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Diana

11 Years Ago

How could it not? Thank you, Sami.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Sad and heartbroken tale here my friend. At least it seems that way to me. Very nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

11 Years Ago

It seems so. Thank you, Jack.

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