There was once a boy who completely captured me. All I know is his name was Michael and he had soft brown hair and sharp green eyes. He was mine, but he never knew that. This piece just made my heart skip a beat, because I just caught a glimpse of him for a moment. That was almost 25 years ago. Man. Angi~
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing, Angi. Some people we don't forget, no matter how long it's been.
There was once a boy who completely captured me. All I know is his name was Michael and he had soft brown hair and sharp green eyes. He was mine, but he never knew that. This piece just made my heart skip a beat, because I just caught a glimpse of him for a moment. That was almost 25 years ago. Man. Angi~
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing, Angi. Some people we don't forget, no matter how long it's been.
Those missed love affair leave us wishing we stop and tried. I like the way you led the reader into good thoughts and possibilities. I like how you closed out the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Bittersweet loveliness in this write. The repetition of "Lover whom I never called lover" is so effective. Some relationships are not meant to be! Very well written. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks, Lydi. Wish I could agree wholeheartedly...