And Yes There Was A Time

Its an open letter to people's God by an atheist, or someone psycho enough to that effect. Read: "Exit Eternity"

O thou dirty Father in the Heavens,

look at thine B******s,

so rotten and malicious,

not even weeping whilst all this happens to thy Brother.

Everything said and done,

practical wisdom - precautions implemented,

why is it still that his heart ached?

O thou dirty Father,

no mercy, he asked for none,

Your "greatness", unreachable,

Godspeed? Sure.

A while of happiness,

an era of lies.

Futility, sadness,

commas awaiting period.

Lifetime vanity.

Justified?

Yes dirty Father,

shameful, piteous?

Your play beyond their convenience.

Your "greatness".

Hopes killed.

As you like it.

His sufferance,

yes your "greatness".

Your amusement,

Their tears,

His emptiness.

She died.

You're their God.

He died.

They died too.

Thine feline masterpiece,

thine puppetry,

struggle, eternal pain.

Maya beyond,

ending, 

ended.

Reviews

[gutlesswonder]

"commas awaiting period." love that line.

[divey]

Thanks.. read exit eternity by me.. perhaps you will like that one too :)