lost

i feel like everything i do is wrong

everyone just annoys people

no matter how hard i try to make it right

it just crashes on me 

it feels like i keep running into a wall

no matter how much i seem to break down

it always seems to build back up brick by brick making the 

climb to the top impossible to reach

i feel suffocated 

unable to breath, unable to reach the surface 

im trapped 

trapped in disappointment of others

maybe one day i won't feel this way

but today, today feels like the world is ending 

and nobody seems to care who they hurt 

or damage in the inside

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

trapped in disappointment of others.
Nice write.

[Dr. Wood ?]

I think we have all been there,,I used to feel like a brick in a wall struggling to get to the top....or a leaf before fall, dreading the imminent drop....It was that ;WHY DON'T THEY UNDERSTAND' period of my life

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice feel of the imagination of agoney and disappointment......