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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
unforgettable

unforgettable

A Poem by dovetailer
"

...your scent...

"

unforgettable

~~~

 

It isn't the glimmer of the stars...

or the silver-blue blush

of the moonlight...

it is not the biting chill of the gelid night air

that assaults my senses...

but your scent...

borne on wafts of heat from your body

that make this night...

 

...so unforgettable...

 

~~~

© 2010 dovetailer


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I think this is a great piece!

So few words but so much emotion, love, longing and sensuality infused into them. It tells a great story of devotion for the "you" in this case, and how much meaning that person has in your life.
Scent as simple as it is, is not only the assault on one of our senses, but once taken in, it invades all the other senses in some shape or form.

Very nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 12, 2010
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