surreality

"an ode to my muse"

surreality

 

I belly up to her bar again…

that surreal buffet

where I am served a bounteous rasher

of mystic delight…

a mix of forbidden love and bestial lust

and mythic creatures

possessing…oppressing…

confessing delicious sins…

words strung together with threads of gold and silver

punctuated with rubies…diamonds…pearls

and all manner of things that glitter…entice…enthrall…

her characters…both base and divine…

come alive in a commingled brew

of deity and demon

…a picture of us all…

in spite of what we aspire to be…

she writes of things that shock

and seduce

and touch us deep inside…

in our lustful core

in places the prim and proper avoid…

she sends her words

as if by divine mandate

to touch and entice our feral nature…

she knows our beast

is clamoring to be freed

to feed on the timid part of us

that holds the key to its chains…

all ilk of passions rise as i read her words

…a menstruous flow of passion

penned in the blood of desire…

they sweep away my pretentious façade

and leave me raw…hungry…wanting…

they are tinder

on the smoldering coals

of my need

I long to understand

her mind that creates these urges in me…

yes…in all who feast upon the

satyr of our gluttonous desire

and yet…I have a picture in my mind

of her asleep

her grand child sleeping…content…on her breast

and know her heart is soft…

it aches and loves

…just like mine…

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

LOL!!!~ u r too much~ =D~

[dovetailer]

"Sir" is so formal...I prefer "slap-daddy"...LOL

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a rich banquet of mystique~ vibrant threads of perceptions connecting one to another and another . . . .gorgeous creation~ sir

[just rose.]

muses are crazy entities, aren't they? mine wears a tiara and rollerskates, and she's always drinking something naughty out of a very big tumbler most people would use for milk. great job on this, so descriptive and rich.

[raining]

Good, and seasoned writer. You have been at this for many years? Alot of verbal feasting, with aches and loves... it has a nice sounding with alot of thought behind what you are feeling. thanks, raining.

[Ed Hart]

you are obviously on better terms with your muse than i am mine