Sober girl tries something new

A girl who's never felt the need to get drunk or high, just wants to fit in and gives in one night.

   Tonight...

I'm going to breath down hard on each puff.
Glisten in filth and swallow the guff.
I'll join in and become it's facebook fan.
Then jump into the role of superhero with the ability I can.

Gone on the search for that special person of the night.
Lifted my head from the puddle of mess and there was my knight.
We danced like animals that were escaping free.
Then drived right pass my limit and no one had the key.

I'll remember this night of madness.
Be the echo in dreams and reflect the sadness.
So before you drink to my memory,
just do me a favour and have one less...
 
                             On me.

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

Love it! Had an edge of sarcasm that was truly re-freshening!

[bubbles]

great poem with really easy flow. really like it

[Senseless whatever]

Outstanding flow, really good visuals, feel like I've been there. don't go it ain't worth it
Great job.