my pain is ur pain

my pain is ur pain

A Poem by Lottie
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inspired by someone very special to me

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Your foots on my heart
and theres you staring at my eyes.
They've turned bloodshot now,
I wonder if you've even realised.

 

Flicking away the tear,
living in disgrace.
Borrow one of my thousands
and pretend it was never on your face.

It runs deep and dark, it forever will.
My pain is your pain, your pain is mine.

© 2008 Lottie


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Awesomely written, yep I can so relate! We do have alot in common...keep writing, if you're anything like me I know it helps for me to write it down and get it out!!!! (-:

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Hi I'm Charlotte :) I think I dislike writing in these boxes, so to sum me up... I love... Collecting things (You could say I'm a hoarder) Dotty things (Yes I collect them too) Dogs (I'd like on.. more..

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