Disney world

Because im determined for a fairytale

Oh pretty daisy along the wall...
to love or to fall?
Oh mediocre image infront of me...
to believe or see it for all it could be?

Oh minute after midnight...
to regret or to enlight?
Oh sweet poision leaving a mark...
to sleep or see that fairygod mother spark?

Oh book of no last chapter...
to run or to live happily ever after?

Reviews

[Sarah Grace]

VERY good. I love the unique quirk your writing has...it puts a little spice into what you read, and makes you want to *keep* reading. Don't change it at all, unless you find a grammar error. (of which there was one that I noticed. But it's fine, really!)

[Michelle Lea]

I just love the usage of words and the flow! "To run" is what I'd probably think of doing! (-:
great write

[Mariana]

so original!!
I LOVE IT!!
me encanta...
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK