Left you behind

Left you behind

A Poem by Lottie

The door is unlocked, but you can't get in.
The phone is ringing, but i can't hear anything.
The roads are unwinding, but your not passing me by.
The signs are visible, but im saying goodbye.

                      I need something
              to smash
                   or
                                    someone to hold.
                                    

                               I want
                                   something more
                      and
                              someone less cold.

Climbing mountains and picking up iced over fragments.
Shifting paths and riding along.
Adjusting clouds and picking out splinters.
Flickering lights and writing wrong.


 

© 2008 Lottie


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Wow another awesome poem for you girl!! I can definately relate to wanting someone less cold!
The flow and descriptive play on words is just great. Keep writing!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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