Save her

Save her

A Poem by Lottie

You see her eyes go.

The walls are judging her.

She's lying on the bedroom floor.

As one more tear does occur.

Trying to hear a voice of reasoning.

She doesn't sleep because she cries.
Trying to see a face of hope.

She doesn't live even though she tries.

You see her face drop.
The door is closing is.
She's lying on the bedroom floor.
As the coldness begins to travel through her skin.

Trying to feel a sense of strength.
She doesn't cope because she isn't strong.
Trying to think a thought of happiness.
She doesn't think so she can't get it wrong.

You see her heart break.
The room is warming.
She's laying on the bedroom floor.

She has to get up now its morning.

© 2008 Lottie


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cool description; great work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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