Rain

Waking up

Yesterday i was smiling

But now i'm running outside in the rain

Where noone sees me cry

Where noone hears my pain

I'm laughing

Just to make it look like i'm not dying inside

I try to hide

Where noone can find me

Who am i?

I don't even know anymore.

Now i'm asking myself why

I just wanna lie on the floor.

I let myself go.

Cry in the rain.

Just one last time

Before i eternally disappear

Reviews

[Peter H]

this is a good piece , it questions who the writer is , they seem to have lost themselves in the pain and they cannot find themselves anymore . what i'd suggest is allow the change because at times these metamorphisms and the pains help us eventually become better persons a more transcendent form of ourselves except the negatives with the positives my friend

[Antoñyo]

Well-expressed emotions of youth and its constant changes with no regard for tomorrow.

Thanks for the share

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The words here resemble the rain... the transition you convey to the reader and the ending sums the piece... Before I eternally disappear... like the rain comes and goes...

[Danilo Ašanin / ..]

I'd like to add something to Peter's review. Yes, change is good. But be careful of what you're trying to change. Then you will stop being you and become something else. All in all, good work. :)