I love it...

I love it...

A Poem by dorkfish
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one of my many issues

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I cant help but love the empty feeling in my stomach,
The hollow feeling, isn’t one I think of as bad,
I like it,
Love it,
Crave it,
So I don’t eat,
just to keep it there.

© 2008 dorkfish


Author's Note

dorkfish
any ideas of the genre to put this in?

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It's a poem of course, but with a little more molding it could be a haiku. I like the minimalism of the poem.
I'd leave it as it is and the hell with the genre.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 21, 2008

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dorkfish
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I love music, it keeps me alive on a daily basis. I'm that girl you might see in your class but never know her name, or you see in the hall completely oblivious to the world with my head phones in and.. more..

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A Poem by dorkfish