The Three

The Three

A Poem by dorkfish
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made up of three short pieces that were in my head durring a graduation i attended.

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On this bitter sweet day
All I can see is the bitter nothing ahead.

 

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Don’t let them see the thoughts screaming through your head
Threatening to pull tears from eyes
And kill you dead.

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Thoughts crashing through my brain
Not caring what (memories) they lace with pain.

© 2008 dorkfish


Author's Note

dorkfish
any thoughts?? i had a "your" between from and eyes, but it took it out, is it better this way??
any other thoughts?

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Added on June 21, 2008

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I love music, it keeps me alive on a daily basis. I'm that girl you might see in your class but never know her name, or you see in the hall completely oblivious to the world with my head phones in and.. more..

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A Poem by dorkfish