MY OBLIVION

JUST MUSE WRITE DOREEN

Perfume scented air reminds,

Leaving me hauntingly incomplete.

Missing your presence in my oblivion.

In a purer glass I see you.

The sky brings only relief.

I can't feel serene without you.

I wish two to share in merciful love.

 

 

DOC DYR

TOVLI'S TEN WORDS

PERFUME

SPLENDID

PRESENCE

OBLIVION

PURER

GLASS

SKY

ERENE

TWO'MERCIFUL 

 

Reviews

[forrestcook]

You did a WONDERFUL job of writing a verse using those words. WOW, I'm impressed.

[Deborah Shepard]

wounderful sis

[emmajoy]

In spite of having to use specific guidance, you've crafted a fine, fine piece of work.

I can't feel serene without you.
I wish two to share in merciful love.

and so say all of us. Sweetly put. Good luck

[imm's place]

nicely done sis, mary

[Helena]

This was beautiful Doc! Excellently penned with fantastic use of the
10/40......you must be thrilled with this! Good luck in the contest!

Helena

[Lewis Findley]

sheer magnifiscence, sis.