RESTLESS DREAMER

TRYING NEW FORM A RONDELET BE KIND

 Restless dreamer,

Head always floating in a mist.

Restless dreamer,

Using rainbows as streamers.

Dancing with wishes, lengthy list.

Hoping life throws no sudden twist.

Restless dreamer

 

DOC DYR

CHALLENGE WRITE

HAVE FUN WITH FORM with PEOTICPIERS

Reviews

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

This I could truly relate to
the dreamer in a fog...
Good job.
Hugs
D

[Noel]

I love this one, it reminds me of myself.

[Poeticpiers]

valiant attempt

[Laura E. Aranda]

Good luck in the contest! This was cool....I like the title alot! Cheers, lea
I can't wait to review some of your other work as well....

[imm's place]

very beautiful, mary

[Deborah Shepard]

awsome written sis beautiful, Fantasy Comments & Graphics

[Lewis Findley]

awesome sis, awesome indeed

[darkgurl]

This is very well written I like this
"Restless dreamer,
Using rainbows as streamers." Cute line here....Kim

[Fran Marie]

Restless dreamer,

Using rainbows as streamers


A most beautiful piece of poetry in both

form and content~ WeLL DonE!! my friend~Fran Marie

[Helena]

I'll be kind! LOL. Good on you, not bad, Doc, not bad at all!
It was a fun form to do, my first go too! Its good to stretch ourselves
with new forms and we are going to get plenty of those now with
our two new "form" contests.

Helena :)