LIFE SHOULD BE

LIFE SHOULD BE

A Poem by doreen cyr
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JUST A DREAMY WRITE Is a pantoum form

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Here in lilac scented hums,

I drift in serenity and dream

Floating along sweet escape

Nothing but breeze to caress.

 

I drift in serenity and dream

Feelings calmed each breath

Nothing but breeze to caress

Just  weightless and free

 

Feelings calmed with each breath

Don't wake me from this rest

Just weightless and free

Oh this is how life should be.

 

DOC DYR 

© 2008 doreen cyr


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This is a beautiful poem, welcome to writers cafe.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very calming and flows gently , mary

Posted 16 Years Ago


"Feelings calmed with each breath
Don't wake me from this rest
Just weightless and free
Oh this is how life should be." Oh how i like these lines here, a very lovely well written piece here....Kim





Posted 16 Years Ago


So beautiful and soothing, Doreen ... Lovely imagery ... hugs

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 27, 2008

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doreen cyr
doreen cyr

drayton valley, Canada



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I like to free write and am from starlitecafe. Have a many varried interests and like to challenge myself to new ways of writing and doing my writes. I Am married and usually use things in my own life.. more..

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