JUST TWO PEOPLE

LIFE AND LIVING

they were just two people in a world full of people,

Making it the best they could, giving there best.

They had good times and they had bad.

They kept their faith and followed his path.

 

This floating world, swept them along unknown.

Although they were happy and content,

They were as hundreds of others on this walk.

Just two people in a world full of people.

 

When their final days arrived and they knew it was time.

They had faith that god would know who they were.

He would see there souls and that is all they cared.

Of all the people, they weren't famous, but God knew them.

 

doc dyr 

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[Legion]

Not to sound rude or mean because I understand what you are trying to say, but see if you can't "beef" this up a bit to really catch the readers attention. Splash around in it a bit and see what you can come up with.