Free Verse poem

This is a Free verse Poem i wrote a while ago. I hope You like it :)

           

       Lambs are as soft as a blanket,

          Fur like the touch of cotton candy,

       As delicate as a daffodil as it skips

          through the Jade green pasture.

        

        The lamb sings to me at the top of his lungs,

           as it feeds on its food, it rubs his tummy

         In satisfaction when as it gets up. His little

           feet is like the wet nose of a dog.

         Cute and cuddly yes they are,

           The shepherd's favorite animal,

         Fast growing but calm and gentle,

            If only we all could be lambs.

Author's Note

What do you think of the dialogue? to cheesy??

Reviews

[Linda]

This isn't cheesy at all, I love the way it's so cute actually :3
It's not that easy to find cute little poems :P all you find are those complicated poems with hidden meanings and strange words lol
This is cool!
And welcome to Writerscafe.org :)

[Fantasygirl46]

Thank you so much and thank you. its amazing how friendly the community of this website is :)