world full of pain

everything was falling apart when i wrote this.

WORLD, WHY YOU SO SAD

WHY YOU FULL OF CRUELTY

WHAT DID WE INNOCENT SOULS DO

WHAT IS WITH ALL YOUR BITTERNESS AND PAIN

MUST WE BE STUCK IN A HELL WHOLE

EVERY SINGLE DAY

WHAT IS THERE TO LOOK FORWARD TO

EVERYONE IS IN CHAOS

EVEN WHEN I LOOK INSIDE

STILL CAHOS I SEE

HOW CAN WE FIND YOUR MEANING

WHY DO YOU SEND US WANDERING LIKE THIS

WHY MUST EVERY HUMAN EXPERIENCE SUFFERING

HEARTBREAK, LONELINESS

NOT SICKNESS OF THE BODY, BUT OF THE MIND

WHY ARE YOU SO CAPABLE OF POLLUTING MY MIND

WHY DID YOU TEACH ME TO SEE THESE THINGS

TAKE AWAY MY PAIN

TAKE AWAY MY SORROW

AFTER ALL, THE GREATEST EVENT IN MANKIND'S HISTORY  IS TOMORROW

BRING ME BACK TO GOD

BRING ME TO THE GARDEN OF EDEN

BRING ME BACK TO WHERE EVERYTHING IS PERFECT AND AT PEACE

Author's Note

it was all caps because i was mad at the world.

Reviews

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Well, you certainly are yelling at the world with power and emotion. I see that you are new, so first of all, next time you decide to post a poem, be sure to select "Poem" instead of story. Also, your flow is pleasantly made for this poem. You find the world corrupted and you are extremely angry. Instead of using capital letters and angry phrases, perhaps you should choose powerful and furiously chosen words. I like the line, "Take away my sorry After all, the greatest event in mankind's history is tomorrow." I think that is the most powerful you said throughout your lividness. This is pretty good, but I can see that woven between your letters, you can do better. :)

[Hatchling]

Great Poem! :)