Talent Enemies

mst time i get full of inferiority complex am always not achieving all that i have dream t of it all feels like am held down.but later i discovered myself and find out it's my talent enemies held me

Time trails and rails
humans with dreams prays,
for reality to claim.
each talent with a sailor to sail
till we grow hair in grew.

Talent are like spray,
spray it; i say
talented head should play
then the bloods of the world will hail
when gifted heads hearts display
with mounted zeal.

Tic-tac  tic-tac
time goes in dark
to talent; hackers never can hack
but time away it can drag
then your talent now as a rag
your crown stolen to "usain bolt" you sag
time it takes and it's hard to catch back
your seeds,now in your face they brag

Shyness you are a delayer
thy talent dies in your danger
i detest,with great temper
my life ,you made like a pauper
against my talent am a racer
in battle shyness wins,boldness never
oh! shyness with you am in anger.

Am the legend of the seeker of boldness
i hunt for boldness
boldness and sensibility equals my greatness
in the midst of all heads and royal highness
thou shall delight in my talented light
even when talent enemies fight
my talent shall shine

Author's Note

Our talent is in us no one can't take ,it can't be hacked we just have to prove,,,never let your talent die in you...cause with it you are great

Reviews

[Liza]

i do notice a theme in your writing that is like an inner dialogue to soothe the doubts and fill with empowering words

it is true - we all have talents - some live with it hidden all their lives because they don't look inwards, congrats on looking in.

[Ivy]

I really like this poem. Great word choice, and rhythm!

[~ Otto Girl ~]

Very nice poem.

[Liza]

a very proud poem - i like the sense that you're not competing.