Fears Of Love

Fears Of Love

A Poem by Paul Okeke
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Am always afraid of what love might turn to,so scared of break up,scared of girls cheating, scared of my feelings trying to figure out the essence of my love life and yet i live with the fears of love

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Am so  exposed
alone to my feelings
my ears are submitted
to the games of lust
i posses a boiling hormone
am scorned to my feelings

Same,same, same, are they
that's what they say
with great claims,
they say lover's play games
but why? and to this i cry,
or is it that young feelings die

Am so scared
to dash away what i care
with her break up never make up
but rather kills me up
how am i sure? there are no games
this makes feelings caned
my fears are so heightened

You are far and i am
will it trust
yes, love is on hailing
but can our tempts be burying
to our last love resurrection
be the king to obsession for rejection.
A task is it to trust

Tears, tears flows  and flows
like am in sorrow
you are gone and voice as low
like a lost termite,
searching for it's colony
loving you, but mourning the distance

Advice are evil
out there are demons in white
cool and bright
but thy words solute d to errors
consequence to brain tumors
Are girls same?

© 2010 Paul Okeke


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Paul Okeke
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Fear love, wow! nIce topic which attracts people!
A nice poem, love this so.

Posted 14 Years Ago


love love love, few know what it really is but many abuse of it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


very nice way of expresiong your feelings. I really like this poem


Posted 14 Years Ago


Hmm it's funny how you're scared of this kind of thing, I think we're all the same when it comes to finding real love. Whether it's young or old love or whatever, real or fake, hopefully not fake xD But anyway, we're all the same when it comes to long distance relationships, or in fact even in not so distant relationships. Lets say in a relationship period. It's sometimes hard to fully give your all to the one you love, coz sometimes, they take advantage, and it doesn't choose a gender. Girl, boy, we all feel it. We're all scared of it. Best we can do is to trust even though sometimes it just ain't enough.

Posted 14 Years Ago


girls aren't the same but people in general struggle with the idea being monogomous if they have the opportunity to experience more
it all comes down to opportunity unfortunately - especially at your young age...
people don't really get serious serious seriously commited until they get tired of being hurt...

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is wonderful and so well written

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is really good and shows that you really do care about this stuff. great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sad. so much emotion in this.
You write very well.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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