Flood

Love
       it
     has
      left
     me
            unearthed
      in
the wake
   of
    the
   flood
that is
              you.

Aug 3

Reviews

[Mad Ben]

Strange but definitely creative. Unearthed... hmm. Trying to picture the poem happening in reality here. Well, I guess it's a good sign when you start thinking about somebody's work to this degree. Keep it up! :)

[Alkonost]

I like the physical structure of this. I read it once, and then went back to read "unearthed you" all alone. I found that to be in itself, almost a hidden ending of the piece.