A Man Hears a Lonely Cry

A Man Hears a Lonely Cry

A Poem by Oz in Exile
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Inspired by my friend Heather. She was missing her man and feeling down, so I wrote this bit o' poetry for her.

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A Man Hears a Lonely Cry

In the stillness there,
An aching heartbeat resounds
To echo my own.

I will sing to you,
A voice to guide through the dark:
"You are not alone

Soon you will be whole.
This is both fact and comfort;
Arms will hold you close."

This is my small gift.
I made it with hands and heart,
Certain it is truth.

                        D.R. Edwards 

© 2008 Oz in Exile


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Oz in Exile
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So beautifully simple. Such a touching reminder that her loneliness is but a temporary yearning. Sigh.

Mx

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved it it was great, the words worked well together, they made this piece have a stronger meaning

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on April 12, 2008

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Oz in Exile
Oz in Exile

Green Township, NJ



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