I turn my back and watch you die

I turn my back and watch you die

A Poem by Dominic Rosales
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I have had enough

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I turn my back and watch you die
 
You make me stand next to you
You make me wear a smile
You make me feel sad and blue
You make me feel denial
 
So stay the hell away from me
I don't wanna see your lips move
You pulled me off my family tree
So now I disaprove
 
I pull this wedding ring off my finger
Let myself go
But the smell of you will still linger
For how long I don't know
 
Being with you was a sin
It was a dirty lie
I should have never let you in
I turn my back and watch you die

© 2009 Dominic Rosales


Author's Note

Dominic Rosales
Something I started a while back, and finished last night. Enjoy

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This makes me squirm, because I could actually imagine a person saying this to someone they were fed up with.I really love how your poems are so emotion filled. This is a great one!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very emotional. Well written, can definitely relate! Simplistic in a way, yet there is no doubt the point you are getting across. Great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dominic Rosales
Dominic Rosales

Round Rock, TX



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When I get bored I write random stories. When I start writing a story that I like, then I share it with my friends and family. I do enjoy reading books. Some of my favorite books to read are Stephen K.. more..

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