I hate this

what I hate about what I just saw

 Makes me sick

 

I look at what they did

and how I hate it

what they did was a horror

they ruined a perfect flower

 

they hold her in between the two of them

stabbing two in the front

 and share a good sham

vigorously another two in the back

 

drop her to her knee

blood being spewed from her mouth

gargling out what sounded to be please

but blah is what came aloud

 

now dead with four new wholes

and the death  of a soul

there hearts are like pieces of coal

thinking they have complete control

 

police are on there trail

and they run for the escape

leaving behind something for the grail

was so what they call there cape

 

freedom was not brought

but hopefully freedom will be revealed

and hopefully a lesson will be taught

and hopefully they will yield

Author's Note

This is something that represents what I feel about something I just saw on tv. I was watching a movie and scene of two men standing around a girl and they took turns stabbing her. I am in the middle of watching it so I don't know the ending so I wrote what could be a possibility

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

havent been on in a while im back and still in love
still luh yah
-baby
100/100

[lindsay]

Oh gezz. That is awful and you described the scene so well. Great job!

[Destinee]

awesome representation. Love how what is happening isn't given right away so it keeps you reading and guessing. great write!