My Suicide Note

What did you expect?

My Suicide Note

 

I loved you all but love comes to an end

So good night to you my one caring friend

When ever I needed help I always reached for your hand

Now for these being my last words, I'll make one more small demand

Tell my Mom that I love her to death

and I said 'I love you Mom' with my last breath

Tell the rest they are minor because they didn't believe me

When I told them I needed help and needed to be locked up with a key

Tell yourself every night that 'you were the one who cared the most'

I'll always be there with you I'll be the quiet ghost

This is the evening that I dine with the reaper

cause I guarantee that my sole is a keeper

Nothing you could do would stop my decision

The only reasoning for my choice is the counter derision

So with my departure to the last words that I wrote

These are my final written words, on my suicide note

Author's Note

It's certainly not my best, but it is what it is and that will never change, I might change it in the future to make better sense but for now this is what I have to write. :) oh and check out the picture, it's my best yet!

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

Its certainly powerful , I respect you for putting your self out there like that. I dont think you need to change a thing because this is such an emotional write I wouldn't want to risk damaging it . A personal piece like this is really great to read because you get a chance to look inside the writers head for a moment and thats what you've allowed us to do with this terrific write. Great work

[lindsay]

I don't think it needs to be changed. It will ruin the rawness of it. I'm not going to gush out comments..I will say is that this very strong and amazingly sad.

[Skelasoldier]

I liked it...i dont think anything needs commented on