Farewell my love

Farewell my love

A Poem by Dominic Rosales
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The sad loss of an inocent soul

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Farewell my love
 
She looks up at me with tear weld up eyes
Her blood pouring from her chest
We think about those murdurous looking guys
How they smurked at us with a hint of jest
 
She cries to me about the pain she feels
Her hand wrapped inside of mine tightly
We look at them drive away in there black lit automobiles
How they turned and looked into our eyes and smiled slightly
 
She weakens her grip inside of my hand
Her face turning pailer as a result of blood loss
We both hoped for the best as we layed in the sand
How know because of them we cannot doss
 
She closes her eyes slowly and weaken her grip some more
Her lips pailer than ever fingers getting cold
We both ask ourselfs what did hey shoot the guns for
How something this dull can stop us together from getting old
 
She laid there dead, weight and all
Her body now relaxed with no breath to spair
We lay there on the beech as the moment came pall
How dreadful it was when we heard that first blare

© 2009 Dominic Rosales


Author's Note

Dominic Rosales
A very sad story I thought up into a poem, please enjoy, as because of the sadness I cannot.

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It was sad. Well worded, once again. :D

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very sad.

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WOW...this was very sad. This poem is very captivating though. It kept me interested all the way to the end. Sad story but great writing and word flow. Great poem! :)

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Added on August 10, 2009

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Dominic Rosales
Dominic Rosales

Round Rock, TX



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When I get bored I write random stories. When I start writing a story that I like, then I share it with my friends and family. I do enjoy reading books. Some of my favorite books to read are Stephen K.. more..

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