What ever makes you happy

A sad but interesting poem, you can read it and realise that each line has its own meaning, and it is the same periodically. You can read it normaly, then realize the similarity to 1-1-1 2-2-2 3-3-3 4-4-4 then the end.

What ever makes you happy

 

When your happy, I feel glad

When your upset, I feel sad

When your annoying, I feel mad

When your dying, I feel bad

 

You are having a good day

You discover bad news is coming into play

You get mad because there is no way

You go down with decay

 

At one moment your feeling spappy

At another moment your feeling crappy

At yet another moment your feelin trigger-happy

At the final moment your feeling scrappy

 

What ever makes you happy

Author's Note

This is my first attempt to a poem like this, and as we all know, when you try something for the first time you most likely don't do the best job in the world, but like I say all the time, honesty is the key to life, so do you think this poem was worth writing?

Reviews

[lindsay]

I like the ideas in this poem very nice. I like "At yet another moment your feelin trigger-happy", nice rhyme with that, i would have never thought to rhyme that saying. I think this attempt is a good one!

[Flo]

Thats a really nice poem, love how its rhyming "1-1 2-2 etc." great job on it, creative, your work is seen in a good way
-Flo