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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Samantha

Samantha

A Poem by Dominic Rosales
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This is a dedication to my friend that I was in love with, and now I don't even know if she is still alive.

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Samantha, this is for you, where ever you may be.
 
Samantha is a beauty,
Samantha is a lie
Samantha is a snooty
Samantha is devine
 
I loved what she was
I loved that she's real
I loved her cause
I loved her spiel
 
You were amazing
You are an artist
You are phasing
You were the smartest
 
Until we meet
Until we return
Until we re-greet
Until then, I will yearn
 
You have pride
You have sorrow
You hid your pains inside
You are a plant that refuses to grow
 
Left me behind your lustrous art
Left what you could to your boy friend
Left  behind all you could depart
Left everything behind, and said, "this is the end"
 
Me, I will survie to see another day
Me, well you were the best friend I ever had
Me, when I was around you I always felt gay (happy)
Me, I always thought, your life was never bad
 
 

© 2009 Dominic Rosales


Author's Note

Dominic Rosales
This is a new kind of poem to me, if you didn't notice, every exact matching word is part of the hidden sentance, it makes out to be 'Samantha I loved you until you left me'
Samantha was a friend of mine that told me many of her problems I will write a new poem soom entitled 'Samantha II'. Until then, think of what you think her problems were, cause I gaurantee you when you read 'Samantha II', you will be surprised.

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thats a good poem. i remember you telling me about her. i will await samantha 2.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Dominic Rosales
Dominic Rosales

Round Rock, TX



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When I get bored I write random stories. When I start writing a story that I like, then I share it with my friends and family. I do enjoy reading books. Some of my favorite books to read are Stephen K.. more..

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