walking behind you

every day i find myself walking in your foot stets trying to find myself. every day getting a little closer but still so far like will i ever get out of the past? ever let u go? will i all ways be walking in your foot prints trying to find my way?

Reviews

[Ryan D. Mosley]

Very nice work on this. Maybe you could elaborate a little more and the poem would speak to me more, but overall this was a good poem. You tell about how you're always stuck following in someone's footsteps and never making your own impact in the world. Overall: Good Job!