ready to let go.

Dark  red  blood  driping  off  the  knife.  Blood  the  color  of  the  walls  around  her.  trying  not to  make  a  sound  scared  to  show  the  pain.  Tears  dripping  down  her  face.   just  wanting  to let  go  of  all  the  pain  inside.  Dont  know  what  to  do  anymore just  ready  to  let  go.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This sounds pretty scary with the blood and suicidal implications. But I was a teenager once and I can sort of relate. It sucks not being able to control your own destiny and yet still not young enough to be treated like a baby anymore. That's my daughter behind me in this picture, she'll always be my baby even though shes 23 now and a graduate student in journalism and already seen more of the world than her old man. lol Keep writing and pouring your feelings into your writing. If you love to write or if it just feels right then keep writing. If you write it, they will read. :-)

[Rambling Prose]

This is a poignant write & one that evokes much thought to ponder. The imagery painted with the use of so few words is astounding. The sad part about the whole theme is: Once you let go, it's only the beginning of the rest of your life in eternity...

~descriptively captivating~

[Ryan D. Mosley]

Very gripping and moving right from the start. It was highly emotional and it held me from the start to the finish. You need to put it in poetry format and correct some typos but other than that it's great. I literally felt chills running through me as I read this creepy and highly emotional poem of a teen who can't control her life and is ready to end it all. I encourage you to build on this a little more. Add imagery; make me feel the crimson blood pouring down the teen's arm. Make me taste the tears that run down her face. Make me feel the pain the they're feeling. Overall: Good Job!

[Alexander W. Quinn]

Wow! Very raw, and emotional. Thanks for sharing.