The Love Game

ever been in love?

   How do i describe this feeling?

 

  I don't know.

  nobody does

  this emotion cannot be described

  In any form of words

  no matter how you put it

 

 

    let me try.

 

 

 it can be a fantasy

 it can be a nightmare

 

i have experienced both sides

 

 

 it can make you the happiest you'll ever be

 it can make you sad and dissapointed

 

 

 you'll end up in misery if you don't play your cards right

 

 

 

 it can make you feel as if on top of the world

 it can make you feel like you've thrown yourself into a ditch

 

 

 don't dig yourself a hole, but take chances

 

 

 

    it can change your life,  just be careful,

 

 

 

 

  when you play the love game

Author's Note

please leave comments so i can improve what i need to for my next poem

Reviews

[GC]

Definitely a nice and casual approach to describing the game of love.
All you need to work on is spell check, it can become distracting for your readers if they come across too many mistakes. Even though I know they're just typos, it still removes them from the atmosphere you're trying to create around them with your words. That is, of course, unless your mistakes are deliberate.
Keep it up though, I look forward to reading more from you.

[L.M.K.]

One word: awesome, Totally made my day ^_^

[Rina]

Awsomeness dudddeee...

fuckkin sweet!

Lovee Youu

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Such is Love; lost if treated as a game. You addressed it with a unique style. Thank you for sharing

[James K. Blaylock]

Oh yeah, this piece pretty much covers all that love can do...

jkb