I wanna know

I wanna know when you look at me

how it makes you feel??

When you think of me 

Does it makes you wanna smile??

It is a smile not frown right right??

But all i really want to know what i can do when your feeling down??

You should know that when im look at you 

The sound off the beat of my heart is nerve racking 

That the thought of you tells me that there is a god out there look out for us

And im feeling the same way as K-Ci && JoJo

You should known that there is somebody that really care and not be like Tyler Perry does and,

Just Playing 

And yes you do make me smile 

From ear to ear 

Can you hear me

By Daedalus

Reviews

[Mark]

ahh.. the beginnings of love when you're just not completely sure of her yet... Will it end in pain or rapture?

Good write here Daedalus, you have talent. Just one suggestion is to clean up the grammar a bit.. especially with poetry, the reader can get confused by what is a grammatical error or what is intended. Keep going my friend!

[Cassie Fraga]

I CAN HEAR YOU!!! hahahaha!! nice word play and awesome of you to mention other artists. nice write!!

[closed..acct]

I love this, This is wonderful and so creative