Mud Hole

Mud = Love

when you jump in you think you'll never be clean again

But when you finally do you jump back in 

Just to get dirty all over again

I know its not smart 

But i have done it about six to seven time now

I don't learn

i have tryd to stay clean

but that no fun

and being dirty is,

well being dirty

So that mud hole

is gonna keep getting jump into

i guess i am just gonna

sit here one of these day

                                   By Deadalus

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like the metaphor in this too. I really thought you did a great job. It was really clear what you were talking about. I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Cool poem, dude! I like the use of methaphor - it makes things really interesting.