A While

It took a long long time

For this to happen

We BEEN together For a While

But we have not been together

i never had to deal with the problem that i might have made

Even i don't make them

but imma keep the good time up

And the sad down

Lets see where this takes us

By: Deadalus

Reviews

[closed..acct]

I enjoyed this write,
It's deep! wonderful write!

[..]

I enjoyed thie write, very nicely done

[Tomislav Petricevic]

It's a good poem, but try to work on your grammar - it can be a little bit confusing to understand what you're trying to say.

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

nice poem.