wings

wings

A Poem by Dan Means

She is a cygnet effortless and rare
replaced her white feathers with golden blonde hair 
Burned in your eyes a sight you can't unsee 
she points her way south far far away from me
with a beat of her wings she's gone before I know
disappearing into the sun forever
and I'm left with only snow

© 2014 Dan Means


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Hello Dan, a bit short but very well delivered. Excellent uses of metaphors all through out. A very cool and credible piece.
Thanks EG

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Dan Means

8 Years Ago

Yeah.... I have the attention span of a knat. So I tend to wrote short poems. I appreciate your ki.. read more
This is kind of like a really pretty amber alert.

Posted 8 Years Ago


strong and beautiful embodiment of a beloved departure .. bravo !

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Must have been a good poem?

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Dan Means
Dan Means

omaha, NE



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I feel their is a lack of identifiably American literature in my generation. I find fewer and fewer stories aching of youthful fearless energy. I humbley seek to write in that spirit and hopefully m.. more..

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