Bleeding Heart

Bleeding Heart

A Poem by Daniel Herrera
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So I created this poem kind of describing my heart as it is and how easily a girl can break it.

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Bleeding Heart

My heart burns

My head aches

I put on a smile

Even though it’s fake


This pain I go through

This pain that should end

It is kept at bay

By my very dear friends


My arms long to hold someone

A girl I can cherish forever

A girl whom I can always love

Someone who I can kiss whenever


She would be my everything

She would be my other half

We would always walk together

And we would always laugh


Until that point in time comes to me

While we are still apart

I long to see and hold her

Even with my bleeding heart

#pleasereadandreview

© 2013 Daniel Herrera


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A very skilled poem with excellent expression and passion put into it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Herrera

11 Years Ago

Y thank u :) Have u read my other poems?
Ezekiel Silver

11 Years Ago

I do not believe so.
Daniel Herrera

11 Years Ago

U really should, my friend Emory wrote them and they're really nice.

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Added on July 8, 2013
Last Updated on July 10, 2013
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Daniel Herrera
Daniel Herrera

Livermore, CA



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