Can't get it outta my head

Can't get it outta my head

A Poem by D. Mansfield
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For repeated thoughts prompt

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GREEEEEN GIANT! I CANT BELIEVE I ATE THE WHOLE THING, Taryton. .. I'd rather fight than switch. "Hold the pickles hold the lettuce, special orders don't upset us.". .

My brain is a machine. This machine gets stuck on catchy jingles, well crafted song lyrics, TV commercials. When I say "stuck" I mean stuck. "SAVE MY LIFE . .IM GOING DOWN FOR THE LAST TIME," HEAD EAST

I CANT GET NO. . .SAT IS FACTION. I CANT GET NO SATISFATION Rolling Stones
You get the idea. .

Great music. . .until it replays over and over in your head for two or three hours. . .or days

© 2025 D. Mansfield


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I really enjoyed this read. Although it was a short, it packed a punch

Posted 1 Week Ago


Wow D! I haven't thought of Taryton in ages!
Yeah, I get the same jingles.
I see LIFE in CARTOONS!
I mean, Real life is like a cartoon to me.
Anyway, LOVED your BIO.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I had the song from ELO (your title) in my head for days one time. I thought I was going crazy. I do remember the jingles...two all beef patties, special sauce, lettuce, cheese, pickles, onions on a sesame seed bun...I'd like to buy the world a coke, and furnish it with love.........You deserve a break today, so get up and on your way to McDonalds.

Do you remember the Dr. Pepper ad where the guy came home and found his girlfriend who was an empty bottle with legs on the floor? ha

Yup, I've been there.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Relic

3 Weeks Ago

hahaha.......
D. Mansfield

3 Weeks Ago

I have that very song stuck firmly in my head now. Oh well it's better than a donny Osmond song. . ... read more
Relic

3 Weeks Ago

lol I'm a little bit country, and I'm a little bit rock n roll. :)
Lol, never could hear as I read wow great great image and each senza follows the steps but I love the ending because it gets back to the beginning, thank god for sharing. I meant good, typo but God is good,lol.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


D. Mansfield

3 Weeks Ago

God is good, thank you sir
Mauricio Montoya

2 Weeks Ago

Yes but what makes it good , I had to read again.
You reminded me of so many jingles over the years. So catchy, they stay with you and filter in and out of the mind randomly. I wonder where the yellow went when I brushed my teeth with pepsodent lol. That one just came back. I find the brain and how it repeats so fascinating. Love the Stones by the way.

Chris

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


D. Mansfield

3 Weeks Ago

Hi Chris, I'm a fan too, really ofvanyvrockbn roll late 60s
Chris Shaw

3 Weeks Ago

Yeah, me too. My era:)
Your repeated thoughts are certainly variable.... and I like them... especially the one about the Rolling Stones...I guess you really enjoy their music and play it over and over....thank you for sharing
Warmly, B


Posted 4 Weeks Ago


D. Mansfield

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much, all my life this has happened, I'm now like an encyclopedia of tv commercials and.. read more
Betty Hermelee

4 Weeks Ago

Good for you...if it makes you happy, always a pleasure...
Warmly, B
Absolutely pleasant poem that you're written out there! I loved it. Nice work it is... keep writing more like this!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


D. Mansfield

3 Weeks Ago

Thank-you so much for reading and commenting
If music be anything, it be proof one hears; if music be everything, it be proof we feel.

Posted 1 Month Ago


D. Mansfield

3 Weeks Ago

I hear, and I feel, peace and live from the 60s run thru my veins.
emmajoygreen

3 Weeks Ago

I KNOW those from an older brother and love them especially.. they have that something that can neve.. read more
I know about a million song lyrics from memory and that's not an exaggeration. It's in my blood but they don't bother me. In fact, I'm upset when I forget a line but that's just a guitar player's prerogative. I enjoyed this.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoygreen

1 Month Ago

Lyrics: musical poems that can raise the body to its feet whilst whispering queries, emotions, in b.. read more
D. Mansfield

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for that
I like this...brings back memories, not just of the jingles...
In my sophomore year at SIU, Head East used to play near the dorms at free dances...They were already good then, but we had no idea how well-known they would eventually be.
Every Parliament gives you, Extra Margin.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


D. Mansfield

1 Month Ago

Thank Jacob, I've always had a problem with songs and jingles getting stuck in my head

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