Life

One day your memorizing nursery rhymes,
The next, your throwing the switch.
Life goes by, like a baseball pitched,
Ending with a "smack" in the web of the catchers mit.

Reviews

[Marie]

You have captured the brevity of life so finely in this metaphorical gem, D... Excellent depiction and word choice. Thought provoking and insightful! Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

[D. Mansfield]

Thank you so much for reading and your very generous words.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, D...

[Chris Shaw]

No truer words said. A nice little piece of brevity here. Time goes by in a flash.

[D. Mansfield]

Chris thank you so much for reading

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome:)

[AYVID]

I relate too much to this poem. A lot of life was over in a whack and a whoosh.

[D. Mansfield]

Thank you I appreciate you reading it

[Neville]

Now aint that just the truth eh' .. Neville

[D. Mansfield]

Thank you. I appreciate you reading it