When I woke

I knew it was permanent,
when I woke.
we had seen our last
of each other.

How desperately,
I have missed you.
I long for
Friend and brother.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Such heartfelt wishes for the one lost. We break worldly ties but we cannot break the spiritual bonds, hard as we may try. A poem that's small yet so big on the message.

[D. Mansfield]

Thank you Divya, I hope your well

[Mauricio Montoya]

so was the first line a dream , awoke to what you see, love or hate, you decide to compromise that love between them and I. excellent write.

[D. Mansfield]

Thank you for reading, I'm not sure where some of my writing comes from, I think even tho I end with friend and brother, it's about my son. Poetic license. . .I guess. .

[Mauricio Montoya]

anyway it got my atention

[NormaZ]

I love the idea that you put in the first lines of waking up and realizing that something is permanent, final, so sad, and the yearning that remains. Such a short poem, and such powerful feelings.

[D. Mansfield]

Norma, I thank you for those so kind words and thank you for taking the time to read it.

[Arundass TP]

Last lines are intensely emotional. Good writing.

[D. Mansfield]

ATP, thank you so much for reading this, and the kind words, I look forward to reading you