Autumn

Autumn

A Poem by D. Mansfield

Days that are slight in stature.
Winds that are colder with age.
Trees showing off shamelessly,
Darkness decends with a rage.

© 2023 D. Mansfield


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Great description of the days of Autumn my friend. I enjoy the cooler days myself. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


D. Mansfield

11 Months Ago

Thank you I'm grateful for you reading it.
Great read, the imagery depicted is excellent. Hats off to you.

Posted 11 Months Ago


D. Mansfield

11 Months Ago

Thank you Andrew, I appreciate you
I like this a lot! These descriptions are so creatively accurate and beautifully poetic, great job :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


D. Mansfield

11 Months Ago

Thank you Nadia
Love this...
and Kelly is right, Autumn seems to inspire poets the most...especially in October and November.
The first line is so good in this piece.What an image created.

Posted 11 Months Ago


D. Mansfield

11 Months Ago

Jacob, that is high praise indeed. Thank you sir.
Is it just me, or does the season of Autumn inspire poets the most?

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

D. Mansfield

11 Months Ago

Kelly, I think it does indeed, thank you for reading and commenting.
A lovely piece of brevity on Autumn ..yes those
autumnal winds seem colder as we age..nicely done

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

D. Mansfield

11 Months Ago

Thank you for the kindness words and for reading
A cold and autumnal feel to this short piece as you describe this time of year in a nice succinct verse.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

D. Mansfield

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much John, I appreciate your kind words

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