Proposing my love

Proposing my love

A Story by Dev

"I love..."
"Stop. Close your zip first," she interrupted and left.
I looked down' "Damn!"

© 2015 Dev


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Sharp and funny! That love wasn't going anywhere...

Posted 9 Years Ago
You're stronger than I am. Unrequited love hurts. If that's what this is about. Short and to the point. Sharpe and pointed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on October 16, 2015
Last Updated on October 16, 2015
Tags: funny, humor, short story

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Dev
Dev

Jamshedpur, Jharkhand, India



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Not really an author but a lover of everything related to literature. I don't believe in exquisite words but something that touches the heart. Yes, the heart, it matters! more..

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