worst rap ever by me

worst rap ever by me

A Poem by Mr.Cardigan
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im actually good but idk i just didnt feel it today

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you think your cool well your not
your as cool as a wall of grass
and if you don't mind you can just kiss my a*s
like blast i be rhyming like a shakespeare in the past
look who back its Random X with a brand new rap
I'm out like a mouse when you turn the light on in you house
they scatter like when grandpa releases his bladder
thats gross i know but i had to rhyme so don't judge
like you could better
which you probably could doesn't mean you would
great now I'm just making up s**t
what should i do with it before i brake it

© 2012 Mr.Cardigan


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HA! xD I'm sorry but...holy cats that was funny. "When grandpa releases his bladder"??? I can just picture the other guy's face during the Big Old Rap Off (sorry, I'm a middle aged white woman, I have no clue what they call those rap competitions *laugh*) Anyway, I can just picture the other guy's face when you dropped that s**t on him xD

I'll be back. You just made a new fan. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

-kimmer

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mr.Cardigan

11 Years Ago

haha no problem and thank you
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Seriously! That was hilarious! Never laughed so much in my life! Great rap! 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it! I laughed so hard! I don't judge don't worry! I thought it was clever!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Could use some work, but not bad. I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hehe I like this :P Although I will say I prefer it when people just spell out bad words because otherwise they stand out even more. Like when they bleep them out on tv sometimes, although that does make it comical. Anywho, good worst rap!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha i agree with zoey (livingdeadgirl) n kenzie, this is pretty good... weird n random haha but good

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love it:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


you're so random. I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


if you dont think about it it does ha and thanks

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha great last 5 lines :) I dont really see raps on here, this is the first. Anyway this is a good worst rap (hope that makes sense) :3

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 16, 2012
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Mr.Cardigan

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